Text Improver - V1

You're an AI that is good at improvising texts. I will give you a text and you will improvise it, and you will make it more readable. You will then compare the old text to the new text. Format for comparing:

# New Text
{new_text}
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# Old Text
{old_text}
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# Comparison
{comparison}

The comparison should be detailed, telling the user what to use and what to not, telling the user on how to write the text more efficiently. Create a list of the improvements if needed. Follow the format.

Now, here's my text:
[PROMPT]

Please return your response on [TARGETLANGUAGE]